Based on the lyrics of "Breathe" by Pink Floyd
I love the sunlight effect on his wing in panel 5. I would be careful with the panel set up with panels 2 through 5. I know you have the pipe in panel 2 leading the eye down to panel 3, but the natural inclination is still to go across the page first.
Yeahh that whole middle section of the page was a bit of an experiment. I tried using 3D effects and props to guide the viewer's eye but most of it wasn't as successful as I hoped. I'll know better next time. Thanks for taking the time to comment!